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Virtual Meowity

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Temptation suspended in mid-air,
so close, yet out of reach...
Face to face with my desire,
although I crave I cannot taste.

High-def virtual life surreal,
tantalizing my senses...
3-D fantasies my reality,
lost in a world I cannot touch.

Feeding my mind, yet I hunger~
real life must soon be faced.
Animated dreams grounded in pixels
leave me unfulfilled, famished.

 

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user name: xianaria
photo credit: http://imagecache2.allposters.com/images/NIM/AF402.jpg

real life may be boring when compared to virtual, but at least you won't go hungry!

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  • CatQueen248
    August 31, 2008
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    This was a really cute poem. Good Luck in the contest.


  • omg-its-sara
    August 31, 2008

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    Good job! That was a really good poem, and you used the picture really well! thanks for entering!

    ♥k i t t i e♥


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    August 28, 2008

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    I really really love this poem.. the stanza that stood out to me and screamed at me is the second stanza. so much is said within that one stanza its amazing. Profound words, strong poem.. excellent..

    good luck in the contest

    kat

    whether you are invisible or not.. I know you there always.. never far away from my heart.