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(not an entry)

This poem’s not an entry but I’m writing it for Jeff

   because he’s been on AP for a year

He writes of birds that sit like notes upon a treble clef

   upon a fence to serenade his dear

 

He writes of tea and cakes and jam and cricket on the green

   long walks at midnight down beside the sea

A lovely lady on his arm as graceful as a queen

   who blushes when he takes her on his knee

 

A rippled lake at midnight and some dappled shade at noon

   a mermaid and a Rose of Texas too

The glimmer of the starlight and the shimmer of the moon

   and countless cuddles when the day is through

 

A batsman mustn’t argue with the umpire – play the game

   by all the rules and walk when you must walk

And he’s the bestest feller on AP that I could name

   (I’ll stop it there before folk start to talk!)

 

 

      and by the way, you ought to get out more!

 

 

 

A contest entry

GIMME BUNNIES! I WANT BUNNIES!

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  • Ellis gold member
    July 13
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    Enjoyed this one...

    knowing who these poets are... and because it rhymes.


  • cricketjeff gold member
    September 27, 2008

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    A pity its not an entry because tied to any of half a dozen of your poems it would have walked of with some shiny things!

    You knew I would love it when you penned, and you were not wrong, fantastic stuff and thanks a lot for it!


    • Mairi bheag gold member
      September 28, 2008
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      My pleasure. Your good opinion is all the trophy I need.


  • Dark Otter
    September 13, 2008
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    How many you want?

    Here's some more! I bet he likes this.

  • Judith Chandler
    September 2, 2008
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    Nicely done. He does write some lovely stuff and this is pretty nice too.


    • Mairi bheag gold member
      September 2, 2008
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      I was trying to emulate his style here, but I guess only Jeff writes like Jeff.


  • deercatcher
    August 30, 2008
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    I wonder when the bloke sleeps!


  • IronMaiden1236
    August 21, 2008
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    Hoppy Hoppy

    LMAO!! Here's your bunnies..


  • Amera gold member
    August 21, 2008

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    This made me smile as I'm sure it will make him smile. To have a poem penned by you is a true honor. Now for the critical critique; It’s not specific but if S3 is referring to me being on his knee then you surely can expect to hear from my lawyer. LOL, fun poem Sis.

    Love,
    Amera

  • Bad Bill
    August 21, 2008
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    I like the humour and affection shown in this piece, Mairi--nice one.

    Bill


    • Mairi bheag gold member
      August 21, 2008
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      Did you not spot that I was taking the Mickey Bliss out of Jeff's style?

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