I'd just keep laying down
and gettting up.
For I heard that when at the bottom
you're at the end of the range.
Then there's nothing to do
but just wait for the change.
And, its bound to come.
for all floats to the top,
unless you get in the way
causing it to stop.
I was once drowning
at the bottom of the pool;
I fought like hell
it was my choice tool.
But, sad to say
it wasn't the correct thing to do,
the more I fought the water
the more I stuck to the surface like glue.
So get yourself out of the way
and let the healing began,
this would be my advice
and my sure-fire plan.
Just release to excel.
Then just go with the flow.
Its the way of the wise,
and of those in the know.
A contest entry
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1800 points, ended September 5, 2008, 9 entries
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true words of wisdom
sometimes the only thing to do is roll with the punches
thanks for entering the contest and good luck
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Yes, its the strangest thing...hahaha... I was fighting so hard to live, in the bottom of that pool, but what I was doing was in fact only sealing my death hahaha now I have discovered that to release and my body would naturally float to the top - who would have thunk it? hahaha thanks lol
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