The steps
Taken in life
Are less tiresome
When the journey
Is shared
A contest entry
- 13 Words Only for this Picture IV by Manda Kathryn.
700 points, ended August 22, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Aww.. that's so true! And a great take on the picture!
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Thanks kiwi.
Its a really cute picture.
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Beautiful and so true; a shared journey is better
Wonderfully penned!
♥
Thank You & Best of Luck!
Stay safe
~Manda
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Thanks Manda. I'm glad you enjoyed it as I really loved the picture. Thanks for the HM also.
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very nice take fader hon gosh this was so fantastic i enjoyed this hon good luck to you in the contest
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Thanks cat. It was such a sweet picture, so deserved a sweet poem.
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Lovely Poem
Your words are as lovely as this picture. You have described it so well. You said so much in a few lovely words. Take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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Why thank you sandy. I really enjoyed writing this one. Short and sweet!
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Your words are so right on and very true. Having someone on your journey like a child really is less tiresome and can make your life so much more joyous.
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You are so right Hekate! Life is much nicer when you have children. It is so much more fulfilling when you share it and it all seems new as when you see it through the eyes of a child. Thanks for a wonderful comment!
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JUST BEAUTFUL
the pic and your tender words are so wonderful...a mom holding a wee ones hand...a journey lead by the carry of a mothers hand...winner for sure
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Thanks kitten. Children just make life so much better!
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