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Young and Strong

Was about a year ago
And things were looking bad
It tore me up inside
Being pulled away from everyone
But I’m moving on
Moving on

New life, New Story
New Page
And now, you remind me of another time
A time when I was a little girl
Now a woman, young and strong
And you won’t break me down

I close my eyes; let the sun shine on me
When I used to pray for rain
This is a better day
A new day
The best day
To be all that I can be

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  • Bob Fox
    August 25, 2008

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    Smiling

    In a world filled with despair it is refreshing to find a young poet that has come out of the shadows and into the Sun. Write on young poet.


  • Paril
    August 21, 2008

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    Love it!

    Very good write, Kay.
    Another great poem from a great author!

    Definitely shows that you're your own person. Keep it up

    -Paril