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My Baby (Monorhyme)

You make my world shine
you make life divine
because you are mine.

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    August 22, 2008

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    Lovely
    The world shines with a childs love

    ♥
    Thank You & Best of Luck!
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • Kari gold member
    August 21, 2008
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    Forgot my clap!

  • Kari gold member
    August 21, 2008

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    I really like the soft flow and rhyme in this poem. I do believe that you have a typo with this word right here
    brcause-because
    Hehe I do that all of the time with the e and r being so close together