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A walk through the park

the simple treasure
of nice weather
the bright blue sky
pretty birds that fly
the sun and its rays
the singing blue jays
the comfortable air
that we both share
the trees and their bark
the smell of the dark
crickets as they chirp
the frogs as they burp
the wind from the river
gives such a shiver
as we walk down the path
you tell a joke, I laugh
you then kiss my cheek
I suddenly feel weak
I look into your eyes
I tell you no lies
I love you very much
with every word,
                with every touch

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