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[ I am startled ]

I am startled
by the shocking familiarity

a lover alone
without love,
but here in this place,
everything matters

reality weighs heavily,
chokes us all
as we wake
from ever-ironic dreams

the attainable is so desirable,
but much too elusive to chase

opaque doubts
and transparent aspirations
slow the clarity

it isn't so simple,
but sometimes it is,
it's high time
we began to live

Author notes

one line is inspired by a Frou Frou song.

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  • nick.
    August 21, 2008

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    yay for frou frou. i think i know which line was inspired by a Frou Frou song.
    love the poem.
    Good job, Hannah-chan.