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Mark

I met you on the deck
As we sailed the blue Pacific



Three days later,


We shared Pina coladas & kissed under your white sheets
& I peaked out your window- to see the slight image of goodbye
I crawled back under your sheets next to you, & crossed my fingers
Hoping to never to forget the impeccable way you made me feel



Do you miss me brown-eyed man?
I subtly miss you.




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he was my muse i suppose, & i'll never seem him again. i suppose that he was meant to come into my life to show me i can feel the way i did. its possible & now i know. thank you mark.

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  • BitterDreamer
    September 4, 2008

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    aww.. this is so sweet and sad all at the same time.
    It reminds me of a summer..ahh..and I still think about this guy. I never knew his last name, just Clay. gezzz..thanks for sharing.
    great job!!!!