Lost
But I will smile
And walk away
My family
My life
My love
Gone
But I will smile
And walk away
My possessions
My dreams
My accomplishments
Stolen
But I will smile
And walk away
My past
My present
My future
Forgotten
But I will smile
And walk away
A contest entry
- 10,000 LANDSLIDE HUMOR CONTESTS 9th of 10, HELL OF A PROMPTI I have eitherstumbled precariously close to the very unstable line of mental health or this has got to be damn good prompt, take a look by Roaddog Wolf.
1800 points, ended September 5, 2008, 9 entries
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Comments
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Liked this a lot good luck
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Nicely penned
I don't usually like repetitive poems but you did a nice job penning this one, good write
thanks for entering the contest and good luck
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Me either! But thatnks!
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this is very good. I had to check out an actual poem in order to appreciate your poetic talent. Your use of repetition is so very effective, appropriate, and engaging. The strength of the human heart is amazing..the ability to move on and not give up on life in spite of what has happened...the tragedies that so often befall us...well-conveyed.
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wow... thanks! I din't really seee it that way when I wrote it... but alright! THaks! I get it a little better!
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A very moving poem. Sorry so long to read some of yours, but I have been busy, and I am still having trouble focusing after my acident. I had a mini-stroke because of my local hospital abused me in their ER room. I am also not sure of how to use the gold faces to rate your work. I really liked it and would give it A+++++. Sincerely, Janjan xoxo
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Wow... thank you so much. It's always good to hear that yo touch someone like hat. Thnk you!
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VERY VERY GOOD!!
I like the repetitive line
"But I will smile and walk away"
Well done and best of luck in the contest!
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