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In a Forest

In the small beauti of a forest
Scattering earth in there strange woods
The roots of it dangle from there mouths
And in a high distance from the strong sun
The small nouns crying faith
As the the animals lives in there habbitat

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  • queen Moderators member
    August 22, 2008

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    welcome to all poetry

    Hi neisha17

    I think you did a great job on this poem, good luck to you in the contest please keep writing, reading and commenting
    Barbara
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  • neisha17
    August 21, 2008
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    I feel like iI put a lot of work into the poem and it turned out good