The Moon Rises Up Red.
And all hell is unleashed,
As the gates open,
And the monsters of the other-world flow through,
Slaughtering and Torturing.
And Controling.
No Sleep,
Staying awake, Muttering strings of words to myself.
Words that, Not Many Can Understand.
And the demons Listen,
To the spells, in their own tongue,
They stop, and they listen,
Because i am not one full,
But i am half,
But, the charm wears off,
And they roam again,
Walking the ground in which we all do,
Breathing the same air,
And, The most i can do is protect myself,
And hope that, the others are doing the same.
And, all the energy, magic, is drawn into that protection,
And the boundary is made.
And my eyes close,
and i fall asleep,
Waiting for the next day... The next night.
Waking up to a broken town, a broken city.
A broken plannet.
And the demons still wander, but, they dont harm me,
Because i am their own,
Flesh and blood,
And bone.
I Am Them, And They Are Me.
And i join them,
Basking in the blood,
In the horror.
And i join them,
And take on a brand new life, a brand new form.
With my real family.
Honey, if you cant beat 'em, Join 'em.
Just, Dont loose yourself along the way.
Author notes
^^. Im pretty pleased with this.
A contest entry
- darkside by emoempess.
700 points, ended May 16, 201 entries
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Somebody daydreams in crimson and pitch colors
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superb:)
"And take on a brand new life, a brand new form.
With my real family"
love this part.....this poetry is so out of this world this is so awesome...
and thanks for the entry
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This was really good. I just found one error though - rome should be roam. And I had a thought, instead of released- why not try unleashed? It brings more terror into your write. The imagery was good, but the punctuation did confuse the read just a bit. Overall it was a great entry. Very entertaining and dark. Thanks.
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Great imagery. Nice flow. I truly can see this. But if you join them you have already lost. Great insight.
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There's darkness here to applaud
I thing it's the best one I've read of yours, it flows well and is quite dark in parts, also if this is how your life really is, than that's very sad. You paint a very vivid picture here and the emotions run deep. Well done and thanks for the bronze this morning.
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this is really interesting a but gross though lol
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Lol you should be pleased... This was awesome. I like the flow of it.
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