I'd love to be
apart of your family.
I have a big one myself
but, it's not near complete.
I've no problem being an Aunt
or maybe you'd like a cousin.
I'm 23 and still young
but, sometimes I feel ancient.
I admire your devotion to
the poems you write.
I'll read as many as I can
but, you have more
than I have written in
two whole years.
Forgive me if It takes a while,
but my goal will be
to read your poems
mile by mile
until I've reached the end
which will probably be never
since you're younger by far then me.
So please add me to your family Tree.
A contest entry
- AP Family by owlish.
900 points, ended September 12, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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funny in way, yet caring...this is good!
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cute
I liked your theme and where you took this one. just a couple of thoughts... typo in your title? "hole" should be "whole", "your" should be "you're"... punctuation, spelling, and grammar were never my strengths, but if you want people to take you seriously, you must learn it. I like your writing, and loved your homepage story - Kevin
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Aw this was lovely; nice job on it =) I like the way you structured it as though it had the possibility of being one really long neverending sentence, and yet i didnt get bored reading it - so i think careful work must have surely gone into this!
Best wishes. -
I'm probably adding everyone who enters in my family. I don't know how to make the contest not anonymous, but we shall see. Cute poem, I know I write a lot, and not al of them are even good. I just have a lot to pour out. Thanks for your entry!
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