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a's anonymous

High as fuck
Contemplating misery
Confused by a dozen broken mirrors of bad luck
Years I’ve wasted for the sake of being wasted
But I continue
Lost with no address or map to spot me on
Trashed on forgettable avenues
Finding myself laughing at people kneeling in pews
They knew what significance to humanity would do
United to someday all reach the same place after death
Hoping there’s more than more after taking that last breath
False perspective in minds
Starting to grow narrow in time,
Separation to create complexity
When no thought in mind creates simplicity

t-t-t-tired of being dosed
but this is the street that I chose
lost with shivers and worries that grow
I got no idea to impose
just using paper instead of my body
too many expressing thoughts and stresses
about how the white man oppresses
the boys sent out
to reassure a country in doubt
patriots in return hung like flags
but we’re still relaxed, knowing comfort comes whilst taking a drag
ignoring the homeless begging for change covered with rags
but you misunderstand what they mean with coins and reasons to brag

a rope scratching your neck
there’s a stool under your feet

you’re a wreck…

empty bottles of rum
don’t you hear the unstable drum of your heartbeat beating fast
you’re 90 percent sure it won’t last
a pair of scissors on the table
just to know you’re capable
unable to swim upstream or follow the flow
simpler to say

fuck it, let go

not really though, there’s an a&a meeting to go to

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  • Ditt0
    September 6, 2008
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    Powerful philosphical features hey... I really enjoy how you seem to get more personal in certain places than others, where suddenly instead you'll give a more objective viewpoint.

    "Hoping there’s more than more after taking that last breath"

    That was one of my favourite objestive lines.
    All in all it was a very clever piece
    Very much you style...

    Congrats
    Ditt0


  • movedon
    August 28, 2008

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    THIS IS MY FAVORITE WRITE OF YOURS EVER!!!!!!!

    This one time, my youth group went to a church in inner city Minneapolis and there was a poster that said, "AA members, please pray" and listed the names. I laughed my ass off, since it totally took the annoymous outta it!! HAHAHAHAHAHAH! awesome write here! I'm gonna nominante it for spotlight!

    Warmest,
    Mylee


  • adios muchachos gold member
    August 21, 2008
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    I'm in AA

    Here's looking at...all of us!


  • Beata
    August 21, 2008
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    wow, I like this. reminds me of some of my stuff. reminds me of myself..