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fooling some


grasp for what seems real to most
mouth agape in speechless stupor
tears of rain melt any heart
confined alone to remain forgotten
pastel skin can seize your whim
outsider

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  • Uniquely-Scarred
    August 22, 2008
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    i liked this poem i wasnt sure about the title though

    • carole21
      August 23, 2008
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      thanks

      glad you liked it . . the title implies that not all knew he was an outsider . .


  • Uniquely-Scarred
    August 21, 2008
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    best of luck thanks for entering