You try so hard
You dont realize
How far you have come
And how far you have to go
Take a step back
And have a good look in the mirror
Who were you before
You are who you are now
Have you ever wondered
What its like without your beauty paste
It doesn't make you who you are
Just makes you feel less of a waste
So why do you do it
Why don't you see clearly
So take a big step forward
And take this epiphany
Clean the corners
Sow the seams
Puzzled pieces put together
And hopefully you finally remember
Who you are.
Author notes
sry i changed it
i did not like it and had to make it look less sloppy
i directed it towards a friend of mine.
A contest entry
- i dont know by VerminVomit.
702 points, ended September 14, 2008, 72 entries
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Comments
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i love it
-i felt like it was directed toward me, especially the first stanza...
-i really like how you rhymed some of it and didnt rhyme the other parts
-i love love everything about it
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