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Danielle

 

Danielle,

 

May God be with you always,

in His strength I pray you stay.

Your gift to us is selfless,

this path you chose today.

~

In life you will acheive much,

for you're standing strong and true.

I know our precious Father,

will forever watch over you.

 ~

Be safe and happy!

 

 

 

 

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  • SeptemberFaith
    August 22, 2008
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    This is such a great tribute/wish for this beautiful girl. I hope your words stay with her, as she travels along the road she's now on.

    One thing:

    "this path you've chose today." I think it would be better as "you've choosen" or "you chose". The way you have it, its in two difference tenses.

    xoxo, Criss


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    August 21, 2008

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    Beautiful Sentiments!!
    Versed to Rhyming Perfection--a Beautiful Benediction.
    Well Done & Best of luck in the contest!


  • writerbyaccident
    August 21, 2008

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    Thank you so much! My faith is going to be the only thing that sees me through this. God is the only one I'll have there with me, by my side at all times. Without him, I never would have thought about doing this!!

    Love,
    Danielle


  • daviscth
    August 21, 2008

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    This is such a wonderful prayer. I just love it and I know Danielle will as well. Thanks so much for taking time to post.


  • ShelleyA
    August 21, 2008

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    A beautiful heartfelt prayer for Danielle. A touching piece. I know that Danielle and her mom will cherish your thoughts. Well penned.


  • Frozentearz
    August 21, 2008

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    ooh this touches me as a wife of a military man,
    May Danielle walk with the speed of the Lord.
    a very touching write.
    Blessings.
    Frozentearz

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