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Confirmed

My hand is remiss of its element
and of purest purpose integral
with want of skin indisputable.

There is but one individual
for whom these fingers move implicit  
with inhibition ever recessed.

 

She owns the inventories of soft heart

and the full contents of my innards.

 

"I love her unanimously"

plebiscites of soul's portions resound.

 

 

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  • PrInCeSs AnAsTaCiA
    August 23, 2008
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    thanks for entering and good luck


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    August 22, 2008

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    You always make your love sound so intense and resounding that it lifts my spirit to see such!

    Another wonderful penning!


  • Naridill
    August 21, 2008

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    Is that font big? Either way - the emotions are strong and forceful - maybe even too much for my black little heart

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