Sweet child of mine
shaped by love
you'll grow to be a man.
A contest entry
- 13 Words Only for this Picture IV by Manda Kathryn.
700 points, ended August 22, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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freaky
Ok, so that scares me a little bit, at this precise moment in time, I am sitting at my desk in work, listening to Sweet Child Of Mine by Guns n Roses, it is currently in the middle of the guitar solo, timing 4.28. That is quite seriously a little freaky...
Congrats on the trophy though, I'm going to scurry away from this page now
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short yes
but utterly sweet and you know what, full of hope and positiveness regarding the future -
Grow to be a man; love it. The pride of raising a child to be a man is wonderful
♥
Thank You & Best of Luck!
Stay safe
~Manda
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I love that song! You've used words for maximum impact here, well done. Good luck in the contest, neighbour!
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Being shaped by love is one of the best things for a child to experience in life. Not all children can get that and it's wonderful when you can give it to your child.
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A wonderful take on the picture and a beautiful thought expressed elegantly.
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This is simple loveliness!
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