Guests coming
Balloons are popping!
WE all outburst in a laughing
As we jump into the pool
Swimming and splashing
Then the wonderful pizza arrives
and we stuff our selfs with pizza and cake
The ripping of wrapping papper begins
"Thank you's" start from me
Then the door bell starts ringing of parents ending the party!
Author notes
My B-day is on Agust 27!
In a list
A contest entry
- Moments of Celebration by Reptile Lady by Reptile Lady.
700 points, ended August 31, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Aww thank you so much for this lovely happy poem you have written for me and my sons
Happy belated birthday
Hope you had a wonderful time
Best wishes to you
Julie
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a wonderful poem full of some cool ful imagery all the way through wonderful i loved the ending where the parent show and the party ends have a great birthday heres a gift for you
good luck in the contest
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Aww cute! August 27th I have to have surgery on my knee
This is same for my birthday! Except without the pool! 
Cute poem! Silverstar2.0 was just bein a grouch. excuse her. The poem is great! Happy bday next wendsday!
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LOL!Awesome part-e!I can't believe I won the "America's got no Idol!" Contest!I guess I really can't sing!!!
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