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beauty beckons

Missing image
nature outside sublime
pretentious our eyes
see it clad in hues.

accept as it happens
sheds in autumn
sprout in spring
never waits in hurry.

girl alluring in nature's cradle
naked beckons beauty
thoughts provoking germinate
craving nimble senses.

body in fine symmetry
fits into wear
effortless grace pervade
tempts beyond redemption.

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  • JinSays gold member
    August 25, 2008

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    girl alluring in nature's cradle
    naked beckons beauty
    thoughts provoking germinate
    craving nimble senses.

    wonderful entry, beautiful, just what I asked for,
    thank you,
    jin