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What did you expect from a mute heart ?

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  • Angel-of-Chaos
    November 10, 2009

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    That is awesome, I love it! It's so creative and it speaks volumes about what heartbreak can make us feel sometimes. Wonderful job!

  • ants at a picnic
    September 11, 2009

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    Bravo!

    very tricky. I am blonde and this took me a second. I was like, "where's the friggin poem!?" Then I was like, "oh..I get it"


    • xeroabyss II
      September 11, 2009
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      Feel dumb, not.
      If you read other comments, you'll notice that it caugh a few people off guard at first.
      So you're completely alright


  • EmoScene-Angel
    September 9, 2009

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    haha...

    i get it...i felt stupied the first time when i read it,but i figured it out...veryy good[=


  • R-l
    August 13, 2009
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    pure genius

    • xeroabyss II
      August 13, 2009
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      Thought you might find this interesting/amusing after seeing your contest.


  • lake of dremas
    June 19, 2009
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    lol

  • Sparow
    April 11, 2009
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    im blinded as well....lol.....great idea


  • Night Terrors
    March 8, 2009
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    okay this is pretty funny lol I kept waiting for the page to load


  • emi
    February 25, 2009
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  • SomeoneNobodyLikes
    November 12, 2008

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    ♥ you are one rebellious creative fucker
    niice


  • bloved
    September 25, 2008
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    silence is golden

    [sometimes]


  • xXdeadXinsideXx
    September 17, 2008

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    This peice speaks out, it wonderful, has alot of meaning. I loved it!!!


  • City-of-Angels
    September 1, 2008

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    This is quite possibly the most creative poem I've ever read. (or well..didn't read haha) It reminds me of the peice 4'33" by John Cage. If you haven't heard of it, it's basically a musical peice where the musicians have measures upon measures of rests. So nobody plays anything for 4 minutes and 33 seconds. Everybody just sits in total silence, While the director stands there and flips the page every now and then. It's kind of beautiful in a way. Cage created this peice to show people the beauty of silence. And that we are around music everyday and don't realize it. I love this, you get the message across clearly without saying a word. Beautiful.


    • xeroabyss II
      September 1, 2008
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      I shall have to seek out and give a listen to this song.
      Sounds interesting.
      And thanks forthe reads and comments


  • Xx Secrets xX
    August 25, 2008

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    Wow...this is by far the most expresive poem I've ever read...the silence is just screaming out...wonderful job

  • saretyuiop
    August 23, 2008
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    Aw, I'm sorry to hear. I wish I could help... Beautiful and very sad at the same time.


    • xeroabyss II
      August 23, 2008
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      Thanks.
      But worry not for this stranger, for nothing ever lasts forever, not even sorrows

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