lazy summer days
warm sun and cold showers
sprinkle through green leaves
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rain drops
on my book
faded verses
Raining again here
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Very nice haiku! I love summer!
<3 Maureen
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lovely imaging...we have had nothing but cloudy stormy weather here in Sunny Florida for over a week...will be nice to see the sun again
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Hope you are doing ok in Florida, storms seem to be the big news this week... I think the Sunshine will be welcome indeed...PK
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The rain is intermittant now but with the high winds it blew over our nice big eucluptus tree beside the house...not all the way over but leaning way too far so we have to see if we can stand it back up and stake it down with ropes until it can grab hold again...the ground is so soggy..we have two years of drought and now floods...I think Mother Nature is really upset with us...
but other then that we have large broken branch on our big pine that w4e neeed to get taken care of since it is hanging...but others have gotten it way worse then we...so we are fortuante...thanks for the concern. "F
Darlene
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Typo? Did you mean the title to be 'squirting' ??
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ahh Hugh-
it has a truthful pause
this thing we call poetry
rhyme in beauty just because
we can exceed our history...PK
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I'm still in winter...so thank you for this gift of sunny days!
~ Nicolette
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Reading under a tree?
summer rain
wet under a tree
my book and I
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dripping foliage
backside wet sitting on grass
soggy pages stuck -
a wonderful haiku...h
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