The window sweats
the horror of lonely
tears,
waiting away the hours
thombed,
open window let me pass
into nature's radiance,
no!
fists of rage strick,
window melt to love
A contest entry
- pic prompt quickie 15 X 30 by Uniquely-Scarred.
300 points, ended August 22, 2008, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Grats on the bronze! Well writ!
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thank you for entering my contest this was strong and started well, i think it lost momemtum, in the last few lines,
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nice write, particularly strong opening "The window sweats the horror of lonely tears"; loved it!
Great work & best of luck in the contest,
Michael
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Thanks for entering my contest, best of luck to you
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