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Tiny Love

Tiny man of future
hope and dreams,
child
see our love
and be

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    August 22, 2008

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    see our love and be ... how I am loving those words.
    Gorgeous and sweet write

    ♥
    Thank You & Best of Luck!
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • Kari gold member
    August 21, 2008

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    It really is very reassuring when children have so many hopes and dreams that us adults don't.
    Your poem ended similar to mine and yours is very sweet