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breathless

I'm left breathless
my air knocked out
I want to moan,
scream and shout...
but I have your rosebud
in my mouth
nothings as sweet
as your petals grow
baring a flower
for me to devour
completely spellbound
where ecstasy is found

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  • hotchocolate gold member
    September 1, 2008
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    Very sensual and good use of words! Love it!

  • azureize
    August 26, 2008
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    A beautiful play on words...

    like your 'soft femme' -- 'can't resist'!! Intensely arousing...