Transparency of hurt, rain,
tears mingle on window pane.
Pirercing thoughts of distain.
Raindrops allow tearful feign.
fighting, longing to sustain.
Clutch faith tight to retain,
praying to remain sane.
In a list
A contest entry
- pic prompt quickie 15 X 30 by Uniquely-Scarred.
300 points, ended August 22, 2008, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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What a perfectly worded write to the pic...an excellent job.
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How many times
Have we all done this. You now have the Gold.WOW!
...mac
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you could feel the fight. the struggle of sanity. thanks for sharing. and congrads on the gold.
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Thank you for stopping by and reading. You take care, Sandy
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Very well done! Grats on your gold!
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Thank you Elizabeth. I appreciate you stopping by and reading. Take care.
Sandy
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TOUCHING!!!!!
Such vivid scenes! Pain and ones sorrow seems to always go with a rainy and cool day.
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Thank You Kevin
Hello my friend. Nice to hear from you. I hope you are enjoying the weekend. You take care.
Blessings My Friend,
Sandy
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hello my lovely auntie
I could spare some time to drop by here again.
Your poem could depict the image wonderfully.
Wish you luck in the contest.
Shahrzad
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Thank You A Bunch Shahzad
So nice to hear from you. I always appreciate your thoughtful comments dear niece. Hugs and Smiles. Take care.
Blessings to you.
Sandy
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Ahhh such sadness I feel from r eading this. my mind went back to times past, the shedding of buckets of tears, sadness covers like a blanket. All the best my friend, a lonely feeling to shed tears of sadness. I can relate.
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Thank You Jules
I appreciate the nice comment. Yes loneliness and heartache have a way of consuming us if we let it. You have a great day my friend. Hugs and Smiles.
Bless You,
Sandy
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Lovely pained love lost. Nicely rhyme to carry this forward in hope faith will bless and dry tears. This is clear and focus on a sad life.
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Wonderful Comment!!
Thank you for the lovely comment my dear friend. Always brings a smile when you stop by. This sadness seems to pop up in my poetry much too often lately. Sometimes I think some broken heats never mend. You take care.
Blessings to you and yours,
Sandy
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Very powerful with emotions, As you can do Sandy you always always make me feel.
Best of luck in the contest.
Blessings.
Frozentearz
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Lovely Comment
Thank you Tearz for stopping by and reading. Always nice to hear from you. Take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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A sad, but well written monorhyme piece. Very well crafted. Great imagery throughout. Best to you in the contest.
Sam
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Thank You Sam
Always a pleasure to have you stop by. Thank you for your lovely and thoughtful comment. Take care.
Blessings,
Sandy
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Hard times
Often in hard times despair over powers us . But the poets gentle ways will recifty that.
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Very Nice Coment!!
Good Morning Bob, Yes despair and happiness can make us feel like a yoyo sometimes. I do try and hold on with my faith to snap back most days. Somedays it is just harder then others. Take care my friend. Always nice to have you stop by. Hugs and Smiles.
Bless You,
Sandy
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I saw that picture earlier and it broke my heart I couldn't bare to see it and you have matched the deep emotions within the picture with your poem hun
Strongly expressed in just a few lines, this reaches beyound the rain
Best of luck!
♥
Stay safe
Love to you
~Manda
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Lovely Comment
Good morning sweet Amanda. Your comment was so heartfelt. Sadness seems to invade my thoughts lately. With friends and faith it will get better. No one ever said life would be easy. You take care. Hugs and Smiles.
God Bless You,
Love Sandy
*Hug*
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best of luck in the contest
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