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Liberation

Was torn apart
like seams of a healing wound
  exploding pain
Your words again!


clawed
  surreptitously, slowly, hissing to me
the untrueness of feelings
  yet
I  blinded my mind
  and gaped



  I hoped so
that I hear some thing
  which
lighted me
  ignited me


But the depth was gone
the floor destroyed
  waves too high
engulfed me


  What  a shallow moment!
yet so real
  freeing me
you granted me

  A life again
and dancing now
  I felt the rain
of freedom pour


  over my heart
regaling me
  to magic lands

I owned again

my heart!!! to love ...
 


Anji,21st August 2008

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