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Water the Soil

Water the soil
That nourishes my roots
I will care for
What has cared for me

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strangerforeigner, Amaranthine Lover

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  • amaranthine lover gold member
    October 8, 2008
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    I like the soft image of this.

  • amaranthine lover gold member
    September 11, 2008

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    To all contestants already entered, please put author's name and Amaranthine Lover in the author's notes so that I know who you are and that I know you read my rules, thank you!


  • Desire gold member
    August 27, 2008
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    Thank You for Your Time!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Water the Soil
    I am sorry You could not make it back in time to correct Your piece- still kept counting 16 Words when this contest called for 15
    Would have loved to have given this a Trophy or HM but hopefully next time I will have that opportunity but I do Thank You for taking the time to pen a Powerful verse
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ while taking in Your words: Water the soil- now when I read this line- I kept thinking of fluid within the body- feed the mind etc- see Spirit thrive- break through ground~ This may sound strange but after reading again- I kept seeing an empty rocking chair- but it was moving- just rocking back and forth~ However this to be interpreted Whether metaphor or symbolism
    Hopefully this makes some sense~
    Excellent take on the prompt ~
    Powerful images & message You have brought forth

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Voice!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~

  • Desire gold member
    August 27, 2008

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    Oh My~

    While reading I noticed You have 16 Words instead of 15~ Just need to lose one word- I'll be back for I am still reading entries- Hopefully by then You will have 15 Words Best wishes


  • crimsondew
    August 21, 2008

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    reminds me of symbiosis and love ofcourse..Good take..
    All the best!


  • Angelflower
    August 21, 2008

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    this was a wonderful take on the picture! you really did such a wonderful job.. Thanks much for sharing!! best of luck in the contest!!


    Angel

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