i am the gift to all men's i am nothing
but the woman of their dream. i slim and
fine that don't want to hide.
my gift to you is a special on you
can open me up and find the gift that
giving you as well.
it's lased up from the breast to
the belly button. i am wearing in
picture it.
nice and pink wanting for you to
unhook it from the back and pull it
off of me
ummmmmmmmmmm
do you want to touch the back of it
so bad the gift set right for you
making you want to do thing that you
wanted to do all night long.
pull it off of me right know
i am gift that no girl want to
give to their men's honey i am
waiting for.
come on in the bed room the
gift is part of me let me
show you the how to work the
gift for you
A contest entry
- IT'S ME BIRTHDAY - FOR KINKY ADULTS ONLY! by Swtpoetryman.
700 points, ended September 4, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
mens
Comments
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sorry did not enjoy
lots of typos but regrettably little kink
you did lay the foundation for kink but no building on it yet -
I actually think a lot of girls give this present at least once. I think any who don't have the idea yet, will look at your poem and think 'ah-ha, that's what I'll get him' Good job.
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ALL OF A SUDDEN I AM VERY HARD AND HUNGRY! HE! HE!
That's quite a gift, indeed - that this naughty boy would love to unwrap which makes him wish that his Birthday came every day of the week. HE! HE! This passed me hardness test - hands down me trousers - where 5 fingers did some stroking and a little choking of the chicken - and I'm not joking, Baby! Thank You 'SO MUCH' for entering me contest and may say you look very pretty in pink - and quite irresistible, too.
Peace & Love!
Earl.
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a very good write good luck in the contest
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