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Believe

If you believe from darkness you'll be freed
Sun will rise and set for you.

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  • Desire gold member
    August 27, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Believe
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ while taking in Your words: If you believe- for some reason- I am getting images of a male doing what sounds like *fly fishing* - that is what I am being given- not fishing for flies but a type of fishing apparently- I'm seeing this person wearing special rubber type of boots but it looks like the pants are also made of rubber with suspenders- After reading again~ I am being shown images of water trickling downstream as if over rocks- more of a serene type of feel- but for some reason getting reference to *showing* Gratuity- like when given someone how can that in turn be shared with another- whether Spiritual, Mental, Physical or Verbal However this to be interpreted Whether metaphor or symbolism
    Hopefully this makes some sense~
    Excellent take on the prompt ~
    Powerful images & message You have brought forth

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Voice!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~

  • strangerforeigner
    August 21, 2008
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    Very interesting. A lot said with a few words. Well done.