I値l probably never see you
when the wind is blowing sweet
I probably walk right past you
everyday along the street
I値l probably never meet you
on a starlit summer痴 eve
Our passion rising gently,
flowing softly in the breeze
I値l probably never hold you
as we dance beneath the stars
Spinning in the moonlight
as we own the night as ours
I値l probably never kiss you
as the moon begins to rise
A moment like no other
kept forever deep inside
I値l probably never have you
as the one who holds my love
Giving unto me your loving
heart and all thereof
I値l probably never leave you
even with my final breath
Our love is for eternity
enduring even death
I値l probably always love you
even though we値l never meet
The poetry of life sometimes,
can be so bittersweet
A contest entry
- Jeff's first year by cricketjeff.
4620 points, ended October 5, 2008, 64 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This had me thinking of so many things. The loves that never come to be but are always kept in a special place in our hearts... and yes so bittersweet.
Great job. Congratulations on the HM
Soulful Woman
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This is lovely beautifully written, the anaphora is nicely judges and the rhyme and flow are delectable.
Thanks very much for a very strong entry, make the contest hard to judge why don't you?
Great stuff
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Thank you so much Sir Poet that is a real honor coming from you.
Antonio
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I’ll probably never have you
as the one who holds my love
Giving unto me your loving
heart and all thereof
Beautiful. There's a lot of emotion here, and it IS bittersweet. I loved this, and I wish you all the best, in Jeff's contest.
Jin
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Thanks for the nice comments JinSays!
Antonio
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This is just lovely! Beautiful rhyme and flow!!
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Thanks so much Kiwigirl!
Always an honor to hear from you.
Antonio
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I love the emotion in this - so softly romantic.
Reads so smoothly!
best wishes in your contest.
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Thank you aboomer you have been so supportive of me, I really appreciate it.
Antonio
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Excellent imagery, A pleasure to read .
And yes life can often be so bittersweet...
Best wishes with this entry...
Many blessings
~A~
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Thanks so much dear poet, many blessings to you as well.
Antonio
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