Fairy headdress
belies the hollowness
of a broken hearted
mask that conceals
a weeping star
Author notes
Picture B prompt.
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 15 Words XXXVI - by Desire.
700 points, ended August 27, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Halo
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ while taking in Your words: a weeping star- for some reason when I was reading these words- I kept getting images of loss- kept seeing long term relationship- and loss- word: misunderstanding when I read that line~ also for some reason I kept seeing a waterfountain- but huge- as if a *cleansing* of Spirit-
then was seeing it rain- Getting reference to: tears from the heavens- and the liquid flowing into storm drains any negativity washed away~ seeing a woman soaked- but feeling relieved-However this to be interpreted Whether metaphor or symbolism
Hopefully this makes some sense~
Excellent take on the prompt ~
Powerful images & message You have brought forth
Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Voice!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Thank you so much for the Honorable! Your contest had outstanding pictures, it was hard to pick just one.
Patty
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This is exactly what someone would expect when such few words expresses the intimate feelings in a picture of a thousand words. Great job, and good luck in the contest!
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Thank you so much! It was such a compelling picture, I had to write something. 15 words didn't seem like enough.
Patty
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Lovely imagery. Well done.
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Thank you very much!
Patty
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