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Haiku - Nature

softly falling
melted and gone in seconds
snow on my nose

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moon through the trees
wind soft and caressing
perfect blue night

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thunder booms out
stars now hide their faces
rumbling rules night

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dark. there’s no moon
clouds gather to threaten
good girls stay home


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#2  or #'s 5,  6,  7,  and  8
depending on how you look at it

Linda Burns
Wiguts
4-6-4

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  • MargaretG
    September 4, 2008
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    I enjoyed these haiku - congratulations for your bronze.


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    September 4, 2008
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    congrats

    Excellent haikus
    Congrats on getting the Bronze trophy
    Hugs
    Susan~~~


  • Maureen silver member
    September 4, 2008
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    CONGRATULATIONS on winning BRONZE, Linda!

    <3 Maureen


  • angelica silver member
    September 4, 2008
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    CONGRATULATIONS Linda on winning BRONZE


  • Mari Goes gold member
    September 2, 2008

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    I really like the scene you show with the 1st one, snow on the nose. Playful and yet solid. Well done with that one

  • Maureen silver member
    August 28, 2008

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    You are so good at writing haiku! I love all of these or this one, depending on how you look at it!

    Best of Luck in this...your first contest at huguenauties!



    <3 Maureen


  • J aime Coudre silver member
    August 23, 2008
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    another set of nice haiku... I like # 7 "rumbling rules the night"

  • angelica silver member
    August 21, 2008

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    Very lovely Linda. This has been a fun contest.
    We're expecting thunder and hailstones in Sydney today so I'm staying indoors.
    Your haiku's are very descriptive and I enjoyed reading them. Good luck sweety.
    Joan


  • hugh wyles silver member
    August 21, 2008

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    Dear Linda,

    This is an impressive quartet of haiku. The first (#5) is very appropriate to our current New Zealand Winter season while #6,7 and 8 with their 4/6/4 format re descriptive little night-songs.
    Good girls are hard to find when they stay home! LOL.
    Welcome to my haiku hike. I am delighted to have you aboard. Congratulations and applause for your entry and good luck in the contest.
    Applause, love and hugs, XXX Hugh (R.)


    • lindaburns gold member
      September 7, 2008
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      Sunday Sept 07,2008. We just got back from RunAway Bay today. The bronze was such a pleasant surprise to find waiting for me. Thank you!! Really fun contest.


  • Venugopal gold member
    August 21, 2008
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    nice enjoyable haikus, well penned

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