If hell existed,
It would lie within her face.
So devastatingly disastrous,
Her irresponsible thoughts were.
When the sun set,
The angels heard her cries.
So foolish to ask for help,
After falling such a long way down.
Perhaps the tears broke her fall,
When she crashed into reality.
Its all a bitter letdown,
When the repercussion set in.
What's the point of free will,
If all you do is destroy?
If heaven exist,
She doesn't belong.
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475 points, ended August 27, 2008, 13 entries
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Comments
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This is great.
Some parts it's like you can see yourself there.
Love the ending..it sums up everything.
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thank you for the wonderful comment!
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