The different records of songs
With background noises of gongs
In Rhyme Town are famous
Because they are sung by Lilian Remus
With funny instruments to play with
She has created extraordinary pieces
Which Rhyme Town people love
A drummer 'boom clash boom'
A guitarist going 'droon wroom'
A pianist going 'bang crash crash'
And a violinsit going 'toroo toroo nash'
Then Lilian sings
A voice with springs
Loo la la loo loo loo
You love me I love you too
With strange phrases
And different crazes
She wears weird clothes
With a collar almost chocking her throat
She creates the music in Rhyme Town
Which makes people jump up and down
They dance to and fro
And then get dizzy so
They kick their legs up in the air
Then throw back their wild hair
They laugh and giggle in lots of fun
And the end of dances is a long run
They come back panting
Also chanting
The phrases of the song
Usually all wrong!
Author notes
Rhyme Town is a series of poems which slick99 created,and he asked the entrants of the contest to write about it.Just explaining.
A contest entry
- Rhyme Town by Slick99.
675 points, ended September 1, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think!
Comments
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funny cute funny cute again so funny and again so cute
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this was cute
Loved it -
I really like it. I think you did a terrific job with this poem and it should win a trophy. So if they were taking votes. I'd vote for you. Good luck and God Bless,
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wow!!! this is a different poem!!! good luck in my contest!!! -slick99
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