maybe we're not meant to be.
maybe it IS you, not me.
you're not exactly what i had in mind.
but maybe its that you're not mine.
Think again,
before you act.
Remember,
you'll take it back.
But maybe i'll pretend to hear,
and maybe even drop a tear.
You're not the one,
that i'd let go.
but youre not the one,
that i'd let know.....
i fucking love you, okay?
A contest entry
- Dazzle me by notorious.
864 points, ended August 23, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
sure. :)
Comments
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This is quite good. Has a good flow to it. The only thing is the inconsistency with grammar. It is ok to use none, or use it every where, but using it here and there really doesn't work well. Would be a big improvement to alter it one way or the other...
I like your train of thought tho, it can be hard to tell someone we love how we feel. Nice job
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thankss. :)
i grammar-ized it.
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