I love you so.
Why do I sit here,
Waiting for you,
To hold me tight?
I love you so.
Why can't you see?
I can't live,
Without you tonight.
I love you so.
I'm addicted to you,
Come back please,
So I won't be alone.
I love you so,
But I can't seem to see.
How much,
You care for me.
Author notes
A poem, about... how I can't seem to see how he loves me =/ well... I just have low self-esteem. Well... if it rhymes o.o total accident. I never do that onpurpose... it's like random o.o... well enjoy.
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A contest entry
- personal poetry. ❤ by aanika.
1147 points, ended September 13, 2008, 40 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
Comments
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haha sorry,
but I don't like rhyming poems
and I specifically asked for no rhyme.
this is a nice poem, I enjoyed it
but it isn't right for this contest.
sorry
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Honey be yourself
When a young lady is happy and full of life and sure of herself he will see this light and he will be drawn to you like a moth to a flame . When you chase a guy he usually runs away but if you turn and live as though he werent there he cant stand it and he comes to within your view .
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Very heartfelt and honest portrayal of your feelings.
Well done & Best of Luck in the contest!
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This is a very lovely write. I enjoyed it. It was so sweet. I loved the repetition of "I love you so." Very nicely done. Great flow. Good luck and amazing write!
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