Pure tears falling upon me
washing away my troubles
Tiny drops cleanse my soul
as my worries trickle from my body
Absorbed by the earth
to help nature renew
Bringing beauty to life
all around me
My problems flowing into streams
filling our ponds and lakes
Absorbed by clouds
to cry down on me again
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A contest entry
- Dark Picture Prompts by goingnowherefast.
425 points, ended August 28, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Aww so sad! Things do seem to just rain down upon us again and again!!
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Thank you
It seems like an endless cycle doesn't it
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Awww that picture is just so cute!!! lol. I really loved this
you did great.. It's so emotional and yet soft in a way as well.. Bravo i'd say! 
so.. BRAVO! lol.. best of luck in the contest brother mine..
Angel
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Thank You
Thank you sweet sister. Probably not as dark as they are looking for but kinda dark because its about our problems coming back
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wow i really liked this. good luck
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Thank You
Thank you so much. This cute funny picture kind of inspired me
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