this play must go on
and we shant stop
til the end
then start again
Author notes
Please let the pictures stir Your rue...Choose one that pulls-
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15 Entries
15 Words Only
Option C
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 15 Words XXXVI - by Desire.
700 points, ended August 27, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: The Play
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ while taking in Your words: then start again- for some reason I kept seeing phrase: A Streetcar Named Desire- but felt like the reference was in mode of so called *transportation* to *reach* Your desires- obtain them- how are You going to get there Strange as if may sound but I'm being shown this half horse body gif- that is running quite fast but falls down- in reference to Your words: then start again- also being shown a relay race around the track- how in order to obtain that medal- must go from beginning to end- not stopping until reaching the finish line- and then seeing a child clapping- remembering that *defining* moment - however that is to be interpreted- Whether metaphor or symbolism
Hopefully this makes some sense~
Excellent take on the prompt ~
Powerful images & message You have brought forth
Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Voice!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Well done imagery of cyclical, perhaps exhausting motion.
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