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I wish i could go back...

You made me sad
You made me cry
Is that all you ever wanted?
Or did you really love me?
You confused me
You ignored me
You made me hurt inside..
I gave you everything
For nothing in return
You meant the world to me
To you I was just a girl
I wish I could go back in time
And never fall in love with you
I could have saved myself
From all this pain and suffering

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  • Lilith-Eve
    November 18, 2008
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    wow, i wish things were dat simple


  • twlightlove
    August 29, 2008
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    wow i wish i can do the same thing


  • DeSiBoO14
    August 21, 2008

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    DiS iS rEaLy GuD!!i KaN rElAtE!!i WiSH I kAn gO iN bAcK iN tImE n ChAnGe ThInGs 2!!BuT eVeRy ThInG hAppENs 4A rEaSoN!!aNy WaYs....GrEaT jOb!!ChEcK oUt My PoEmS 2!!


  • peridotPixi
    August 20, 2008

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    i think this poem is speaking deep from your heart, i like the thoughts you have used here, and the feelings you have expressed, although i like how you want to save yourself from the pain and turn back the clocks, each thing in life happens for a reason and you usually learn something from them, there are many things i wish i could take back, but they molded me into the person I am today, this is great, i love the Just a girl part
    keep up the writing,
    ~Amy