Acid Rain falls down
Faces tremble in the night
Its all peace tonight,
No more names to give
loving every bit of it
now I plan to cry,
I wont live this way
not any taking notes or names
this is my own pain
Author notes
haiku..
Option: 6
A contest entry
- I Want You Bleeders......(Options galore!) by iamthebeatles.
2700 points, ended August 22, 2008, 7 entries
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Love this. Great write, great style. Amazing!
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Wow...such sadness and pain....brave write.
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Awww! this poem makes me want to giv you a hug!
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i like the beginning, also awshum imagery, nice
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Like I said before good hikues fasinate me, and this defiantly does the trick. I like how you have incorporated some of the words in it as well.
Acid Rain falls down
Faces tremble in the night
Its all peace tonight,
Fascinating piece, wonderfully written.
cassie
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