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How She Wept

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Sweetest faery within his hand she's kept,
as moonlight kisses trees within their path.
Upon his hands she huddled close and wept,
while the warming of flesh calmed her wrath.

Her precious blue eyes registered some fear
and her heart spilt pain within his warm hand.
Soft fingers raised, to wipe off sorrows tear
and love swept through her in strong demand.

Soft wings opened wide to his loving touch
as she embraced the gift before her now.
For years within dream she wanted so much
to make this fantasy work out somehow.

She kissed his fingertips, embracing him
with passion returned, she made his heart swim.

Author notes

pic prompt
20 Poets
30 Lines (No More Than)
30 Minutes

I will give 20 poets 30 Minutes to pen me something wonderful in no more than 30 Lines
1. No T/a/L/k L/I/k/e that or instant DQ
2. No Chat Speak
3. Please for the love of all that is sacred use spell check
4. And if you reserve please come back and finish
5. Please have fun.

Please put the link into your poem if you use the pic.
http://i525.photobucket.com/albums/cc337/YSIMON68/fairies/untitled.jpg

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  • HpWICKEDangel
    August 21, 2008
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    delicatly sweet.


  • Griswold silver member
    August 21, 2008

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    Wonderfully done Sonnet baby, great flow and rhyme and a good story. Love you sweetheart, good luck...Scott


  • cricketjeff gold member
    August 21, 2008

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    delightful take on the prompt and delicious sonnet.

    Good stuff

  • Lady Jean
    August 21, 2008
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    one word "WOW"! it was a moving peice of work i loved it!


  • Poetic-Theorem gold member
    August 21, 2008

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    Bravo

    Excellent take on the pic prompt
    The ryhme and flow is flawless and your imagination is brilliant.
    Your words brings life to the lovely image
    Wish you the best in the contest
    Take care
    David


  • poeticweaver gold member
    August 20, 2008

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    Excellent

    As always, I enjoy your words from the heart.
    Great job, and keep that ink pad flowing.

    Much love sweet V~
    -Timothy


  • fairytalelovestory
    August 20, 2008
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    wow so much passion conveyed in so little words, beautiful good luck.

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