I can feel them on my lips,
These three little words that
Once uttered have the power to make
Such magnificent feelings stir deep within.
Oh to be able to scream them from
The very rooftops, tell the world the
Truth about what it is that longs to escape
Or even just to say it to you, once, twice, a lifetime more.
It's funny you know, how in
One small second my heart has blossomed,
How the delicate rose within has bloomed into
Something of intense and magical beauty incomparable.
And I wonder as I pen this,
Does it strike you in a sense similar?
Do you feel what i feel, know what i know
And yearn for what I so badly yearn to hear and touch?
Look at me, listen to me,
Like a fool I babble on and on
Spilling and blurting my feelings out
And open, and I wonder will I ever show you,
What I quilled for you this night.
Author notes
This was written for someone special, I don't know if I'll ever show them it...
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This is so sweet. Such a wonderfully penned piece and I'm sure the person about whom you "Quilled" it would love to read it. You should show it.
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tre bien, trop bien
oh wow philly, this is great absolutely show them! if you do they better appreciate it as much as the readers on here (:
take care mi cariño
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not bad
been awhile since i've seen something like this from you. it's refreshing, it's sweet, and it expresses your thoughts perfectly. well done
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Something this beautiful and heartfelt should never be hidden from the one it was inspired by.. You should show them this wonderfully written piece from your heart Love like this is rare and beautiful.. I wish you the best in this journey of yours and hope that you show this to that someone special..
Thanks much for sharing!!
Angel
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I would agree with the previous posters. Definitely show this to the person you wrote it for.
The imagery is fantastic. I particularly like the part of your heart blossoming into full bloom. Very nice.
Clappy dudes!
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A beautiful expression of love...don't confine it to here, show it to the person who has made you feel such deep emotion.
A great write, a pleasure to read.
Well done.
Slayer
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you definitely should show it to the person you wrote this for. this is probably the most beautiful love poem i have EVER read...its not cliche in any way like most are, and it stirred something up inside of me that i can only describe as amazement and it has left me completely baffled that i was lucky enough to come across such raw and pure talent.
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