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globe man

He shook the dark globe a second time.
YES
thats all it said and he almost dropped it.
He summoned all his power
and he put on the Fez.
He shook it violently this time
the magick 8 ball,for a minute or more
with his eyes closed.
He stopped and he looked
YES,with bubbles.
And he threw it and broke it.
Splash.
The last globe he had.
Stupid thing,was all he said,
he put a gun to his head
and became a ghost.
all in all he made me laugh.

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  • Little Eagle Greeters member
    August 21, 2008

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    Hello SsshVoices

    This contest is not for poetry about judging. This contest is for ranking what makes a good judge. Unfortunately I will have to remove your entry. But you do have the opportunity to reenter by following the rules set by the contest page.

    Thank you
    Tammy