Back and forth
I ponder those
things which
I do not understand
The swing takes
me to where I belong
Author notes
20 Words
A contest entry
- Semi-Quickie picture prompt by OnceUponAMind.
450 points, ended August 24, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Ahh something with brevity and conviction, you have done a really good job of working from the prompt, well done and best to you
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lovely! Grats on your silver!
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Beautiful poem here...Like it..Congrats on silver dear!
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This is lovely Pondering on a swing, what a great take
Thanks for entering and good luck!
Amber
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I do do my best thinking while perched upon the swing!! This was an excellent take on the picture...Well done and best wishes
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