I give to you my heart,
all that I have dreamt of
lies inside your soul.
carry me in passion
through each sunrise,
lie with me tenderly
in sunset's devotion.
listen as sweet breezes hum
the tune of a lover's duet,
while stars glisten
to the beat of soft desires.
Author notes
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A contest entry
- 20/30 Fairies by fairytalelovestory.
450 points, ended August 28, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Excellent
Oh my what a truly touching and loving creation. Best of luck in the contest.
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That's so sweet of you bro, thank you very much.
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Aww that is just lovely!! Love that last line because the 'beat' could refer to the heart or her wings!
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Yep! that's what I meant by it woo hoo, someone gets my scribblings lol..Thanks sis!
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This is very sweet, Linda. My first impression is that it sounds like wedding vows. Great job with the prompt. Best of luck in the contest.
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wedding vows? It could have given that impression, huh? hehe Thanks for the comment Chuckster
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A most beautiful, well written composition--
Excellent!!
Well done & Best of Luck in the contest!
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Thank you so much for the very kind words. Much appreciated.
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Sis, ohhhhhhh the love in this one... The memories this stirs... This is just beautiful! Something in this one, just magical! The elegance, the softness, WONDERFUL Sis!!!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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I'm glad you enjoyed the read Sis, Thank you for always being encouraging!
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Just beautiful! You always pen with such elegance and this piece is certainly that.
All the best in the contest
Gaylene
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Aww thank you dear. You're so sweet
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Well penned Linda. Love the flow here. Luck in contest.
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Thank you Rick..It coulda been alot better, but I thought we only had 30 minutes to write it in, so I hurriedly rushed through it. But oh well..there ya have it
I love the pic prompt for it.
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Pretty, good luck
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