the palm,
it says so much,
passiveness giving to commanding nature,
you are held here,
reverantly,
and I feel your pulse dominate me,
your being shining as the light that guides
through the darkest of turmoil,
the darkest of the night,
a new law that governs with a mighty reach
Author notes
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- 20/30 Fairies by fairytalelovestory.
450 points, ended August 28, 2008, 11 entries
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Comments
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Very lovely here and comforting to me kind of like being held in someones hands
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What a beautiful take on the prompt. Best of luck.
Linda
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Wow this is really beautiful, ty for such a wonderful entry. good luck
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