Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Northerly Breeze

The trip had progressed splendidly

As they traveled up towards Tripoli

But trouble soon started

When somebody farted

And everyone wanted to flee

 

He smelled like a ripe wheel of cheese

And everyone started to wheeze

So they dragged him behind

On a forty foot twine

And  prayed for a northerly breeze

.

.

.

.

.

.

Author notes

Rumor has it that sand skiing will now be in the 2012 olympics!

In a list

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 8 of 8

  • fall from grace
    November 4, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    okay well class is over so i can't read any more... but you are pretty effing amazing and i shall look you up once i am at home haha


  • Roaddog Wolf
    September 1, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    lol good limerick

    made me laugh a bit good write has the limerick to the tee.
    thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest....


  • dustookie2
    September 1, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    A Limerick had me laughing as I was reading. Have been waiting for someone to drop in a fart...no pun intended Great take on the prompt. Good luck in the contest.


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    August 29, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    LOL Truly a limerick for the moment. I had to chuckle here. ~Pamela

  • Topnotchsy
    August 24, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Haha, nice job and best of luck in the contest. Few forms of poetry (actually none that I can think of) lend themselves better to humor than the limerick, and you've done a nice job with it.


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    August 21, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    LMAO wonderful job

    good luck to you in the contest

    Love
    Passions


  • Amera gold member
    August 21, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    This is funny and I can't believe you found that picture of a school bus in Maine. Bravo!

    Love,
    Amera♥


    • PerVirtuous
      August 21, 2008
      Edit | Reply
      It was hard, considering all the desert area I had to cover since we live in a rainforest.

1 - 8 of 8