A gentle touch
So little yet so much
Can you little fairy grant my wish?
Take me away
You are my fairy
in my hands today
dreams I seek within your soul
My fantasy dreams will never go
Fluttering away with your silver wings
Within you are my fairy dreams
Author notes
photo prompt: 50 words
http://i525.photobucket.com/albums/cc337/YSIMON68/fairies/untitled.jpg
A contest entry
- 20/30 Fairies by fairytalelovestory.
450 points, ended August 28, 2008, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prewrite-palooza by swim.x.
1650 points, ended October 6, 2008, 101 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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preeminently beautiful!
great imagery i can see why you won gold
you're awesome keep em coming
~teddybare~
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wow... this was... beautiful.
I love how you used the word "fluttering" to describe the fairy's silver wings.
Again you have great imagery and you really made me feel like I was holding a fairy.
This was great, you are wonderful with fairies
Thank you for donating points to my contest and congratulations on the gold trophy!!
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This is cute and obvious that you have an obsession with faries! Great rhyming! keep up the good work
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Such a gorgeous little poem. I love the way that without too much description, you painted a clear and beautiful image of the photo you used as inspiration. I only saw the picture after I read the poem and it fits perfectly, so well done
Congratulations and good luck in the contest.
Chin up,
Swim.x -
Awwwww! How cuters! Just like you!
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I love Gold Fairy Dust
I see you had gold fairy dust magically materialize into a well deserved gold trophy on this inspirational poem of yours. Thank You
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thank you for the wonderful comment, i love how you say that the fairy dust turned into a trophy so cute,
keep up the wonderful writing,
~Amy
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awwwwww, this is sweet
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good job with winning gold! it was well deserved i love these lines "A gentle touch
So little yet so much" its cute
lol
xoxo- love ya wifey
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This poem...
This poem is really good it shows a lot of character and It's wierd but it's like I know what you're talking about. This poem is just great I really like it and I think that it shows a bit of your side that says Hey I can dream too. Keep up the great work and I'm going to keep commenting on your poems. -
this is amazing with a great flow
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This is absolutely what I was looking for. brilliant.
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